My hands drop as your words cut me deep,
there's no denying them.
Goodbye my almost lover,
good bye my hopes and dreams.
My voice is a raspy whisper,
as I try to plead with you,
I began to see my life crumble and be swallowed.
Goodbye my almost lover,
good bye my hopes and dreams.
I'm trying not to think about you,
can't you just leave me be.
I can't seem to get enough air,
I'm gasping,
how I need you,
how I love you.
Goodbye my almost lover,
good bye my hopes and dreams.
I'm trying not to think about you,
can't you just leave me be.
Your lower lip trembles,
your eyes glisten,
with a slow motion,
you slowly turn around and walk away.
Goodbye my almost lover,
good bye my hopes and dreams.
I'm trying not to think about you,
can't you just leave me be.
I collapse to the ground,
the pouring rain drenching my face,
your already gone.
gone;
Goodbye my almost lover,
good bye my hopes and dreams.
I'm trying not to think about you,
can't you just leave me be.
Goodbye;
Author notes
I was getting a bit annoyed with the amount of happy poems that I was writing so I wrote this. I hope people like it. I was about half way through writing and I realized that it basically was a poetic version of when Edward leaves Bella in New Moon.
What do you think? If I have an uncapitalized "i" please tell me=]
Comments
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And now i feel the need to listen to Almost Lover. thanks. way to be.
ohh twilight.
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Can I cry? Really really good. And what's wrong with happy poems? lol. Hope everything's going good.
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hehe, I watched you type this. leave it to you to write something twilight-related =]
very grand job though.
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wow....so true..i can't wait to see new moon...i will probably cry whent hat happens...great write about that version
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