Once there was a beautiful
Enchanted red rose
So full of vitality
So full of life
Once a small, but promising rose bud
Now a full grown rose
She starts to get sick
The rose starts to wilt
She dies and turns to dust
The rose dies
The rose will never know
What it meant to me
Never again will the rose me happy
Life so precious as hers
This rose meant so much to me
My life has been forever changed
When she died
The rose died
The world just bled black and white
Color didn't exist
In this world that
I call hel
This rose will never know what it meant to me
Author notes
10. The Moment She Died, the World Bled into Black and White
The day that my grandmother died changed my live forever. She doesn't know what she she meant to my mother, sister and i.She will be greatly missed.
We Love You Nana
Mildred G. Mitchell
Born 3/31/1931
Died 1/14/2009
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A beautiful write
It is sad when we lose a loved one
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Aww I am soo sorry to hear about your Gramma.
My grammy and I were really close too, and I know the feeling 
Anyway great write. Keep writing like this.
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Oh Darlin' im so sorry *Hugs*
Tis truly a beautiful piece, and written from the heart.
From pain comes great beauty.
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It is sad to loose the people we love.
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-huggles muchly-
i love the piece, we used the same idea and title ^_^ we kick ass like that lol
-huggles more- i'm a good listener, if you ever want to talk hon.
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