I cannot stay

Never take me

from your heart
or you'll have forsaken our love

and I shall dwell in hell's eternity

Heaven’s gold

can't replace your seal,
my eye’s has opened unto you

and I see a faithful soul

You may love another day
but for today ... it's mine
another time be yours

Death has no hold in my life
I shall believe in love's everlasting
and unto you, here, today

Forsaken truth is but a lie
my sight and heart is in you

and you shall nerver take

my love away

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Written March 29th, 2004

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Dark-Princess
April 1, 2004
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CONGRADULATIONS on yet another WIN!!! YOU DESRVE IT!!! I told you these old poems were really good!!!
Tammy33
Nelak
March 31, 2004
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Beautifully written!!!
FifthDove,

What a poem! This style is so different, I've never read anything on AP like this before. I have tried to write like that... A brilliant write. I could just close my eyes, and think of the positive aspects in my life. By the way, before I forget, beautiful background!! Very neat. Is 'Ner' supposed to mean never? just wondering!

GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST!!!!!

Writing is good for the heart and soul.

Sincerely,

Nelak

BRAVO, FIFTHDOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
FifthDove
March 30, 2004
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You say the nices things. lol. love ya * *
Edited on Mar 30, 6:41 p.m. because 'added a rose'.
Dark-Princess
March 30, 2004
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beautiful
You did it again.I don't think you have written anything that I have not liked! You are a brilliant writer!!!
Tammy33