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I stayed to sleep

I stayed even when you didn't,
feeling human,
unrequited desire.
Sweetie, tell your story.
Your last Lullaby, our last story
on death row.
Shut up and go back to sleep.

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  • J. M. Spenser
    August 18

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    This was pretty awesome. Its like you were born to take your titles and put them together and makeit brilliant. Well done job. Bravo!