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Simple Riddle

I’ve got a secret, and if you’d like to know,
You must first decipher the riddle I write.
The key to how to see it is just below,
If the number of stanzas can open sight.

I will describe what is a most sacred thing.
With John, it was given, but not fully yet.
It is for the wise one who follows The KING.
It burns like fire, on half of the whole set.

“With me, you’re eternal and no thing will faze.
No lasting faze, as long as your soul’s not gone.
But, to have me, you must commit for all days.
You must walk and talk with faithfulness turned on.

Who am I, as such born from a Holy Love?
Who’s purpose is to make you complete and true?
I’m the full baptism. What am I made of?
I’m not in water.” The SPIRIT is in you.

Author notes

The riddle mentioned at the top is easy enough. The answer’s in the question.

But, there’s another message hidden in here as well. The key I’ll give you is this: Four times the count.

You should actually get this as well. The meaning of this one is two fold. One plays on the theme of what the first riddle defines. The second is sort of personal to me.

This was sort of a trial run. I'd love to do more like this. Longer, bigger ideas, more complex, more of a narrative. I dunno. Blahbbady-blah-blah.

Lastly, a bit more subtext. The theme of “4” throughout is my understanding of the whole team. It’s the FATHER, SON, HOLY SPIRIT, and then the individual as well. “You”, if you will.

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