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My Daughter

I hope you mirror
my good traits,
never my bad.

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  • melphleg gold member
    August 10
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    Isn't that what every parent hopes?


  • janejainejayne gold member
    August 10
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    Lovely!

    A brilliant poet with a vivid imagination and the
    abilty to make hearts happy!!!


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    August 10
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    so well said... x


  • suseann
    August 9
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    If only imItating traits was all it takes , we'd have little to worry about. But...this is a lovely thought.

  • Bad Bill
    August 9
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    Succinct...and very much to the point.

    Good one,
    Bill

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