I cried last night,
thinking about your life...
Now that you are gone;
Are you happy?...Sad?
Oh! How's California?
What about Beverly Hills?
Maybe you are happy with them,
but here I am,
lonely,sad,and miserable,
living this sick life in this old city...
Tired in the weather,
I never feel better...
Your world, my world...
Will never meet again...
Like the sun and the moon
that shines in different timezone.
A contest entry
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this is for my first love, but she left me and went to california...:(
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this is exactly what i dont want to happen with me and my ex
he broke up with me and it teared me apart and hes going to uni soon and im afraid ill never see him again
great write
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thanks..
Oh.... I can feel what you are feeling..=( hope everything will be okay..
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wow
you may shine in different time zones but the heart knows nothing of time or distance, guess its all part of the test but believe me if its meant to be if its written in the stars time country or worlds apart you will be together again, and if not, well it was never meant to be x -
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oh..thats really encouraging..I hope so..but i think everything changes...
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