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Savior?

Murderer (Female/Whisper)

I see the bodies floodings streets
I see their they're blood inside my mind
I see their corpses on the wall
In my sleep I see their eyes

Save me, God
Save me, someone

Voices all around me
Their words inside my head
Voices of the damned and the voices of the dead
Let me be in peace from my irrelivent existance
Let me be free from torment and the pain of retribution

Salvation comes to you
When nights are dark and cold
Intervention lost in darkest dreams

Please...save me from my torment
Bring me to my salvation
Bring light from the horizon
Save me from my endless torture
Bring me to salvation finally

(You will never forget the pain you've brought to us. Despite your vain accomplishments we will never let you free) (multiple female/spoken)

Blood upon the walls
Salvations vaporized to ash
Winters drawing closer
Redemption lost to fate
Let me be in peace, for once
Let me be redeemed

Save me from my torment
Save my mortal soul
From tears among the tainted glass
From blood and sulfur rain

Ashes built to statues
Blood to prophecy
Wars forever fought
With long forgotten means

Forgive me, god, for sins in life
Redeem me, please, in death
Save me from Azreal's wrath
And demons in Hell's depths

Save me with salvation
Save me from eternity
Help me find redemption in my world of pure damnation
Save me from a world of torture in a world of no forgiveness.

(We will never let you go. You will never be free) (Female/echo/spoken)

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