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Insight into the depths of a seeking soul

i
You are near me
when I'll be seeing her again
this city
When he's done with me he just goes to bed

ii
unworthy of living
we put in the ground
when I called you
do my homework

iii
Why, Daddy?
on a street lined with trees
To follow the only true Lord,
        "Farewell"

iv
Silence
I remember it was something important
if i turn around
blinding nothingness

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    August 13

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    Wow, this is definitely a random piece. Great job! Thanks for entering. I really enjoyed your work! Good luck in the contest!


  • Melodies
    August 9

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    HA! A pieced together poem that is very, very good. Fun to do and fun to read, too. Could be given to an English class to interpret. lol Good job!