Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

The waiting game

They stole the song
that greeted dawn,
now the air is heavy,
and labouring lungs
lose their will
for the mind is weary.
survival is the battle,
penny pittance is the pay,
will it change?
or must we wait
for death's sweet lullaby.

A contest entry

I

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • perfectsunset gold member
    August 9

    Edit | Reply
    Very deep write. So beautifully
    portrayed.. I really like your
    wise concepts throughout as well.

    Though, can you please place in your
    Author's Notes which prompt you used.
    Thanks.

    Best of luck & thanks for entering