Here's the truth before your eyes
Truth is
Everybody gets hurt
People die
Everyday
Most do nothin about it
They stand there and look on
I'm speaking up
Speaking out
Hear my words
Listen to em well
I'll say em once listen up
You know someone with a gun
Take it away
You know the girl in the corner crying blood drippin from her wrists
Lift her up
Truth is
Were the future of America
What are we gonna do?
Its your decision
Live it up
Fuck it up
Its your decision
Now make a choice
Join me in the fight
Or just start walkin
What does this poem make you feel?
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Hmmm. Some mistakes with grammar and lacks flow. An average piece at most.
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This is SO true! I really love how brutally honest you were, its good to remember where we've come from and the choice we have on where to go next!
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Great experession. You speak the truth my sweet Amber. I wish there was more people like you in this world. I wish there wasn't so many blind people in this world. Why do people act like they don't care? When they know deep down their care very much. They don't like to show their true feelings. That's another problem with people they keep it bottled up. Which isn't good. I am going to join you in the fight and I am fight with you until the end.
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oh wow i like this and it has a lot of truth....i think you should stand up to America and speak the truth to everyone because everybody walks past a person in need of help and they don't do anything....some may feel guilty but others jsut straight up don't care....I really like this alot!!!!!!!!
GO YOU!!!!!! GO YOU!!!!!!!!! GO YOU!!!!!!!
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