Its the principle of things right?
Get your heart broken
All that stuff
Pain helps you grow
Some....
Express pain diffrently
Me....
The call of steel against my skin thats my escape
Its release
Pleasure and Pain
What a combination
Slowly pain is overtaking you
Your slowly losing yourself to your demons
Why can't you just fight back
Toss your fear aside
Life is one hell of a battlefeild
But you gotta keep battlin
The end of heartache will soon be near
Seek me
Call me
I'll be waiting here
Just fight against yourself
Scream your hearts desires
This distance
While I cling to memories
Sleep brings relief
The hope of a new day
Seek me
For comfort
For solice
Completion
I'll be waiting here
Just leave out all the rest
Take my hand
We can run
You know me
You know me all to well
In sorrow
I speak your name
My voice mirrors
Mirrors my torment
Just release your pain
What does this poem make you feel?
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for me theres no escape with sleep,i still wake up screaming sometimes,you are very talented darlin,i love this poem,the emotion hits home and the imagery is right on,great write darlin,wow
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another great poem,you realy are a great writer


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Aww thanks! Sorry it took so long for me to reply. I haven't exactly been checking up much on my poems. But i'm not that great.
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great poem
wow nice read

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Thanks!!!
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Wow! O.O such a powerful write. The emotion so raw. So intensifying. I like it very much! You wrote this perfectly! It's true the words you speak
This is beautifully written. What a creative write Amber. You are so talented. I love this. :]


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I ain't that talented Hun!!!!!! But thank you!!!!!
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To me you are! ^w^
You are welcome. I love you =)
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