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Pain

Its the principle of things right?

Get your heart broken

All that stuff

Pain helps you grow

Some....


Express pain diffrently


Me....


The call of steel against my skin thats my escape

Its release

Pleasure and Pain

What a combination

Slowly pain is overtaking you

Your slowly losing yourself to your demons

Why can't you just fight back

Toss your fear aside

Life is one hell of a battlefeild

But you gotta keep battlin

The end of heartache will soon be near

Seek me

Call me

I'll be waiting here


Just fight against yourself


Scream your hearts desires

This distance

While I cling to memories

Sleep brings relief

The hope of a new day

Seek me

For comfort

For solice

Completion

I'll be waiting here
Just leave out all the rest

Take my hand

We can run


You know me

You know me all to well


In sorrow

I speak your name

My voice mirrors

Mirrors my torment






Just release your pain

What does this poem make you feel?

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  • blank1 silver member
    2 days ago
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    for me theres no escape with sleep,i still wake up screaming sometimes,you are very talented darlin,i love this poem,the emotion hits home and the imagery is right on,great write darlin,wow


  • blank1 silver member
    October 22
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    another great poem,you realy are a great writer


    • Kinky Cuffs
      November 26
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      Aww thanks! Sorry it took so long for me to reply. I haven't exactly been checking up much on my poems. But i'm not that great.

  • great poem

    wow nice read

  • Wow! O.O such a powerful write. The emotion so raw. So intensifying. I like it very much! You wrote this perfectly! It's true the words you speak This is beautifully written. What a creative write Amber. You are so talented. I love this. :]

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