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Letters Amongst Words


I mean what I say and what I say is this;
I love you.
Not 8 letters and 2 spaces,
but deep true meaning of love.
I've never felt this way before
but these words describe my emotion.
I love you.
I've heard you say it too,
although not recently;
I feel it sometimes though.
Is it because yours are only
8 letters and 2 spaces...
...and not actual words?

Author notes

Not that it necessarily applies to my life, but just thinking about all the times people say things that they don't really mean, or that they can't give back to the person. One person loving the other more, one person feeling sorry for the other, these things. And since speech is the main communication tool in a relationship (90% of the time anyway), I feel it's important to make sure all parties are on the same page...

Sadly...their really not a lot of the time...

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  • ProudMomma
    August 13
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    this is beautiful i love it!!!! i like the not 8 letters and 2 spaces part!! Great write as alway

  • wow. this is really painful. love th eidea this poem was all about, but its just so painful in the end. hope you're feeling better, hope things turn around for you.


  • A63-Angel
    August 9
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    touching, beautiful! loved each and every word. this is a great write!