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Just To Be With You

Time moves by too fast.
When your heart aches know I'm here
Just to be with you. 

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Haiku

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  • Megy206
    August 21

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    This was short(well haikus are meant to be anyway ) but well written. I love the message that it presents. It's true time often does move to fast and we lose touch with people; and I think your poem captures that well. Good job and wondeful take on the prompt.


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    August 10
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    beautifully short and sweet. very powerful and enlightening.