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unfinished*

This one is for
The plastic bag left out in
The rain, forgotten
Rusling around the gutter
Believing with all the
              winds might
That is it a dog

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I'm not sure where its headed or what to do with it

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  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 21

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    hmm, i agree this is an amazing start, i really like it and cant wait to see the rest please tell me when it is done
    Stephanie ♥


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    August 12
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    Great start! Cant wait to see where you'll take it

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