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Short, Yet No Simplicity

Happiness does not exist in the holocaust,
mad men rule while sad souls rot.
It should matter not what you are,
but for beauty lies within one’s heart.

While evil reins insanity’s mind,
innocence falls limp to the ground.
I know what we all wish and hope,
may killers burn in hell.

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This is another poem about the holocaust I wrote for my honors english class so it still is not very good, but my class sure liked it.

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  • carebear123
    January 28
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    hey im just going to comment this again bc i love the holocaust so much....i love your poem!!! i havnt read anything on it as far as poems go and im glad u wrote this. it makes me sad to think so many died because of a bunch of inhuman people. makes me sick. im glad u took time to write about it!! =)


  • carebear123
    September 1, 2009
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    i like it alot. im really into the holocaust. idk im weird lol i just find it really interesting. its the only historical event i have books on and im in honors history haha go figure lol wonderful write.


  • storiesuntold
    August 31, 2009
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    I think it is awesome

    You write very well and speak from the heart about people who harm others this is a great write


  • MistressCaos
    August 20, 2009
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    interesting concept.


  • ScarsFade
    August 11, 2009

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    I do like it becuase it's simple, i think more details would cause this poem to be more effective and tug at the heart strings a bit, But the simple mode is working for you. this was a great poem well written...much <3...scars.


  • Twisted Reason
    August 10, 2009

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    Wow Sammy... I must say that was brilliant. You certainly have improved since I first met you. Thanks for sharing your feelings,
    Peace and love - Mitchell


  • lifereaper
    August 8, 2009

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    wow darlin,this is awesome,you are an amazing writer,i do love reading your work,amazing

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