every kiss is a first my love
each kiss a silent sentence
only our hearts can understand.
that first kiss said i love you,
the next said I'll be there
the third said I'm yours always.
my heart replied i love you
and then I'll never leave
the third kiss said it all.
yet even 6 months down the line
the words will never stop,
each kiss is filled with love
in my heart our love is true.
From the first kiss until the last
Is always from me to you...
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Picture Credit:
3) http://evangeliine.deviantart.com/art/Love-22427619
A contest entry
- Help me out. by PerpetualNight.
1100 points, ended August 18, 13 entries
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"yet even 6 months down the line"
You must be young, ah I wish six months seemed like a long time to me.
I'm just being silly. It's a lovely poem about enduring love and there is no greater thing in the world than that. It's something I am working diligently toward -- the lifetime of commitment and continued love.
It sounds like you are on the right track and hopefully you can one day count the relationship in years not months.
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Very loving
and sweet..just the kind of write to make a person swoon and get all 'fuzzy' feeling inside..bravo!
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Thank you for following the rules
Wow. This is an amazing poem. The flow is so perfect and the message is so sweet. Undeniably a true love poem in the highest degree. Thank you so very much for this entry.
Perpetual Night -
This is so sweet, it speaks of such innocent love and yet it so can be reality for those that truly believe in the power of love.
I like it, I like it so!
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