Look at me and smile
It’s dawning; let’s go outside
Cool breeze, pink sky
Enchanting scenery
Birds and bees.. heh
Inhale
Then exhale
Smoke rises and vanishes
I didn’t quite notice the smoke
I was too busy staring
Taken away;
Such a serene morning
Look at me and sigh
Mark me with your kisses
Make me shiver and groan
And I’ll make you scream
Hold on tight
I’m flying you away
Look at me and moan
Louder
In my ear
Whisper the most wonderful things
Make me kneel
Make me melt
Then lick me.
Your skin.. it does make me cry
So beautiful
So heavenly
So beyond anything anyone can ever imagine;
Beyond oceans and skies and peaks
Beyond valleys and rivers
Beyond suns and moons and stars
Beyond planets
Your skin is my own personal universe
Your body holds my hills and lands and seas
Your eyes are my stars
Your hair is my wind
Your mouth is my fruit
Your lips are my haven
And inside them I’ll forever hide
Inside of them I’ll live
Look at me and dream
You’re my queen;
My body’s your territory
You’re my goddess;
I adore you
I’ll watch you breathe
Listen to you dream
Smell you tasting me
And taste you smelling me
I’ll feel you inside me
And inside of you I’ll be
I’ll fly you away;
I’m your own personal little wing
Good morning
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"So beautiful
So heavenly
So beyond anything anyone can ever imagine;
Beyond oceans and skies and peaks
Beyond valleys and rivers
Beyond suns and moons and stars
Beyond planets"
oh hell it's beyond... just beyond..
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ya weyleh...i'm out of words rana...
i love this te7didan : "Smell you tasting me
And taste you smelling me"
it's amazing,surreal and totaly true...
i love what u do,i love the fact that u feel so intensly,i love when u have a muse and inspiration...
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The start was simply serene and warm. As the poem
progressed, the mood changed to passion yet there was
still that peace..a nice read
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great!
I love the words that you used..I enjoyed reading this..
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This is beautiful. For some reason, it makes me think of a scene in Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince, where Ron and Harry are talking about what makes a girl something to fancy, and Harry says something about Hermione having beautiful skin. I know that's not what you were going for, but...
I did think that this was an amazing poem. I think, honestly, the movement was perfect throughout the poem, segueing in an interesting fashion from being outside to being wild inside, too... Keep it up! this is a great poem, and I'd love to see more like it! -
a beautiful dawn captured well here in verse. nice passion explored, leading the reader into your heart. nice writing.
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jesus..
good morning indeed..
beautifully breathtaking..
i love you, and your serenity..
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