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Pleasure

Missing image
melodie's undressed souls
climbing stairs; smiling
impulsive as labors of love...
revealing secrets above.

reaching magical notes
devastating kisse's, needs
danced; never increasing
it's slow sexy romp.

their silent eye's told tales
of sobering passion, songs
giving birth; to love's treasure...
infinity counldn't measure.

ebony, ivory bliss found
perfection; a golden erection
of salacious pleasure.



Author notes

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wYJf4J7VBaY
Song by Leonard Cohen...Tower of Song


picture is from Bling/MSN.com a pic of artist Leonard Cohen

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  • Swangrnv gold member
    August 9

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    aaww..

    sweetly sensual and as always you use such amazing imagery it makes one 'wanna be there in that moment' very nicely penned poetess!

  • this was very well written, i enjoyed it a lot


  • Andi. gold member
    August 8
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    beautiful.
    thank you for sharing