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Which Came First, the Chicken or the Egg?

There was a little dinosaur,
who made a rock his friend.
He took the rock everywhere,
and said he'd keep it till the end.

One day is was a wee bit cold,
so he held it very close.
But when he felt it start to move,
he thought that it was gross.

First popped out the little head,
then some arms and legs.
So which one really did come first?
The chicken? No. The egg.

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  • cricketjeff gold member
    August 25

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    The chicken that laid the egg that the chicken that laid was hatched from, was hatched from an egg laid by the chicken that hatch from the egg that was ...

    All the way back to your little dinosaur

    Delicious

    Jeff

    Thanks for the entry.

  • Topnotchsy
    August 19

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    So this is how it all developed. I did wonder. Now to explain how the dinosaur came to be if there was no egg for him to hatch from... (Just kidding, best of luck in the contest with this fun write.)


  • babyseal
    August 11
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    nicely put


  • Sheli silver member
    August 8
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    Simply delightful!


  • Love of a Bullet
    August 8

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    This work is a soft and pleasant argument with easy-feeling flow structured in a kittenesque, playful format. Its ordinary work usage is more than redeemed purpose and display, in the same way that we admit Dr. Seuss is not Poe while taking nothing from Theodor Geisel. This poem is an enjoyable read, completely lacking in pretense. In short, a worthwhile find. We thank the author for the effort.

    ~Das

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