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Inside My World

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Inside my world

 

I grieve alone

 

wishing on illusive dreams

enjoying my humble home

 

My plan for the future

seems to be beyond my grasp

 

needing more physical strength

before my time elapse

 

I dream of love again

 

wanting someone that really cares

someone true to himself

 

someone honest and fair

 

I prefer to travel this road alone

than to suffer heartbreak again

 

I want to cuddle in the arms

of a soul-mate not a friend

 

So I wait in silent wonder

and enjoy my life each day

 

If my destiny is I be alone

then I surmise that's okay

 

 

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    October 31
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    Hon....you speak as if you were me....I love this....So beautiful..It is my story too....Bookmarking!


  • John BoSox
    August 14

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    Terrific write..You allow the reader to share your emotions..you did this so well..good for you.This was an easy read..tender..sad.It held my attention..I read it twice, to savor the taste of itCongrats on this..I willread more of your writes..I promise

    John

  • Macsword
    August 10

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    Very Emotional...

    there's a sadness in the words, but a particular strength too. The poet is willing to allow the fates to decide loneliness with contentment of a mate, with a brighter future. I liked this write.


  • The Drifter
    August 9

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    So many are lost in this maze, but you seem to accept the fact that things might not work out as you wish.
    I have found that if I do my best that things work out for the best.


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    August 9

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    I love your bg with this...and the words soared into my heart. I felt the longing and the underlying fear...honesty that touches the soul. My blessings to you!

     

     

    Az


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    August 9

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    Excellent write portraying sincere and deep emotions--
    interesting rhyming pattern---
    Well done and best of luck in the contest!


  • arafura gold member
    August 8
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    Very moving.

  • life student
    August 8
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    relationship heart ache does create the greatest angst and poetr

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