Can't sleep
I am thinking of you
Yet so far felt so close
This night, I miss you
Author notes
yess, I miss someone. . .
A contest entry
- happy, happy, love, love!!!!!!make me feel it!:D by Xxpoison.kissesxX.
800 points, ended August 18, 43 entries
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uuh, what do you think about it?
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Wow so few words yet the message is completely clear
I can relate to this write You said alot with only 18 words :] yes. I counted haha Great write
Thank you so much for entering my contest and Good luck
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lol thank you.
i didn't even count the words.
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People do not realize how much emotion could be put into such small words! Over the course of 4 lines you have portrayed the greatest of all emotion-lost love. It is so deep and touching that my comment seems to be longer than it!
Thanks,
Good luck,
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thank you.thanks for ur beautiful comment.
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so obvious... yet i know, and it was powerful with just these words:]
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thanks!
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