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For Jordan

Waiting for the light fade
Blinking out and around the uncertain shade.
Greener feelings of a deeper hue
and tickling tantalizing touch gasps for tomorrow.

For you a whispered word of waking
And the hope that the world shall be yours,
A beat moving in step over time
and new life taking hold of the dryness each new day.

Flashes, slashes;
lightning scoring the sky-
but believe in believing
and great things will surely come to you.

May greatness and a bright future always lamp your path.

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