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Submerged in the Holiday

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The evergreen tornado stirs in my mind,
rooted in a puddle of crimson satin.

Lights drown your artificial limbs
as they soak in the scent of cinnamon candles
and whimsical songs of a jolly old elf.

Reflections flood the metallic orbs
floating among emerald needles,
Christmas morning splashes my sleepy eyes
and I rub them with anxious hands.




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Prompt: 13 - http://3meeses.files.wordpress.com/2008/12/upside-down-christmas-tree.jpg

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  • Patpowers silver member
    August 9

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    Gives you that warm feeling as you read this. I enjoyed the message you shared. THANKS!

  • awwwh its all festive and lovely and made me feel all warm inside ^_^