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Songs from last night

This is an SOS
But I'm a realist
And no one is gonna save me.

I spin out on curves
But baby, then I learn
When to tap breaks and not speed.

But now I'm speeding...
To see you.

I never knew that a girl
Could do this damage to me.
I was given the world

And it was burnt with the trees.
Fire inside me.

This is an SOS
But baby, don't distress.
I'm still here

Waiting for every word,
And ever verb, perturbed,
That you write me.

--

Now I can't-- can't rightfully show you
Just how I love you, today.

But I can -- Certainly tell you,
One day, I'll show you

"here's to our lives being meaningless,
and how beautiful it is,
because freedom doesn't have a purpose"

--

This is an SOS
And it's my final test.

Could it be? That
You were left alone,
By a ... Cat,

Who, I guess I should've known.
That.. She just wanted you home.
--

And I just wanted our own island.
I just wanted our own future.
Just wanted someone holding on,
Just as hard as me.

I only wanted to be the
Only thing that you see when
Things were illuminated by the sun.


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