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"Eyes to Swin In"

No, don’t look away.
Look at me with those piercing eyes
Let them engulf me in a cucoon of warmth
How I miss you
If only you knew
How many mornings and nights
I wake up calling your name
Chained from you by one meaningless law
Trying to bite through the chains
But only hurting myself
No, please stay with me
Let me hold you one last second
Let me feel your warm body against mine
Let me love you for five more minutes.
Don’t turn away.

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  • Ughh.. lol. I wrote this a while ago. And i just decided to post it.