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fallen for you

the day you asked me
my heart was racing
i couldnt speak
all i could do was nodd my head
you were finally mine,mine forever
now i've let my guard down
i sometimes worry
every kiss
every hug
brings me closer
i fear the thought of being close to anyone
when your around my thoughts go blank
my heart beats faster with the second
when im around you i feel so happy
so strong
when only im just a weak little girl
who has simply fallen for you

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