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i'll take my mind sunny side up, not scrambled please.

i.

denial
lullabies.
teeming endless.
i admit what i deny-

ii.

behind the veil
living.
he was a cancer malignant in my mind-
violet & grey.

iii.

appreciation of seconds
free in the clouds
silent, as it passed;
isn't it?

iv.

magic 8 ball
smeared the pupils-
be men
not eyes.

Author notes

only one I cheated on was a line from a poem written in july. I didn't write one in july because I was busy that month. So I picked a line from on in june because it was close as I could come.

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    August 13

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    Love the last stanza!! Second one was also pretty cool. Thanks for entering. I really enjoyed your work! Good luck in the contest!


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    August 9

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    "behind the veil
    living.
    he was a cancer malignant in my mind-
    violet & grey."

    Powerful Lindsay.

    All the best,

    mj.