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Whore

It's so easy to hate you,
spill my anger towards you,
to look into your eyes and despise you,
I feel only resentment for you.

I listen to your cries
in that annoying little voice,
you lament for romance,
but never knew what it's about.

You change your boyfriends
every day or two,
but for their love they can't expect
your smallest kindness in return.

Your clams that you would give
the whole wide world just for his kiss
are disgusting all in all,
for you give only shit.

I don't really want to hear
that I know nothing of love,
just because I've never tasted
the lips of a man.

They say that you are nothing
nut a true romantic
that you are in love
with the feeling itself.

Why do I at all
waste my time with you
when I know that you are really
just a simple common whore.

Author notes

I wrote this at school when my 'best friends' nonsesnses hit the roof
Written March 29th, 2004

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  • queen Moderators member
    June 13, 2004
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    I could feel your emotions dripping from the page. Excellent write. I hope your friend finds a better path. Great poem. Queen

  • Cassieopiea
    March 29, 2004
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    Wow, this is really powerful, full of intensity and emotions, I hope this person isnt as bad as you make her out to be, but it is good that you can write about it in such a progressive way.