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Ooh lala <33

His warm sinewy body, next to mine. I look up towards his face, and see his wonderous smile. I bury my face in his chest, and breathe him in. His own special scent, a mix of spices and other fantasmic aromas. He smells my hair, and kisses it. Then says in a low tone, " I love you". My heart melts like butter. I look back to his eyes and tell him, " I love you too." We keep our eyes on each other. Silent thoughts shared, unspoken. We lie down in the cool grass beneath the juvenile maple tree on the hillside. He lies down and pulls me atop him. I fall over onto him, and he just holds me there. I put my head against his chest and let myself get caught up in the rhythm of his heartbeat, and the even sound of him breathing. I look up at him, he looks down to me, and we pull together, and kiss. And it is a kiss hardly imaginable. Full of love, and passion. I can feel his intensity in the way he breathes in deeply, and holds me even closer to him, the way he runs his fingers through my hair, and holds my face. I can only hope to reciprocate equally to his great love. I caress his face in my palm, his beard a smidge rough, but I like it. His face is smooth besides his soul patch, and warm. His hair is long and thick and soft. And so there we are, both lying on a hill in the grass, fully entangled in each other, his legs around me, mine betwixt his, hands on faces, or holding the other.
We change it up, arms around each other, hands running up and down our backs; he is so smooth. His skin is warm, and soft and smooth, I can feel his muscles under the skin. He strokes my neck, it gives me goosebumps. I draw my finger across the nape of his neck, and he shivers and laughs. We cuddle, and life is perfect.
The perfect lover is what he is. Positively wonderful and splendiferous. He cares, and is sweet, and always shows how much he loves me, even when there's all sorts of people around, he'll put his arm around me, hold my hand, give me a quick kiss on the cheek or hair, we sometimes even engage in a Doorway Block, by standing right in front of a door, and hug. We've even been detected by the PDA police.
We are what we are. Crazy mutha fckers...but, together, it's all good. People around us say we are a great couple, that he's so sweet, and likeable. And we are and he is.
I can't help but to imagine what life will be like in a few years from now, when we're both done college, him for HVAC and me for culinary arts or nursing. Will we get married? Will we have kids? How many? Where will we live? Or will we travel the world and go wherever our hearts decide to take us(which knowing us, could be a very difficult decision, we don't care where we go, as long as we're together)? I reallt think this one is the one. The one I'm MEANT to be with, forever. There are so many coincidences in our lives, that I think it has to be fate. True love is something beautiful, and something one should hold on to as hard as they can. It is the essence of life.
I love you, My dear, sweet, Rob.

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  • MJ Forgives
    August 8

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    You know what is so funny I can relate to this so well. I really can. I love your poem thought it is sweet and wonderful
    -Jess