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This will be the last letter

there's somethings i wanted to say and do but never got the chance
to have,to hold to til do us part and a first dance
showing the world you were my only girl as we grew old together
family by our side,telling them our story forever
but of all the things i wanted to do
i never planned on losing you

when they took you from me with a tear in your eye
i'm sorry i couldn't kiss you goodbye
no hug to say it will be alright
as your love flew into the night
i know it's not right
and i pray that these words makes it better
cause this will be my last "i love you",this will be the last letter

i missed you today,like i did everytime we were apart
i was yours,your everything.as you were my heart
and the way you touch me left a mark on me
the love in our voices,it was obvious to see
that we had something special,it will never go away
have i told you "i love you" today?

when they took you from me with a tear in your eye
i'm sorry i couldn't kiss you goodbye
no hug to say it will be alright
as your love flew into the night
i know it's not right
and i pray that these words makes it better
cause this will be my last "i love you",this will be the last letter

saying your name still makes me cry
and til this day i still wonder why
it has to be this way
with time i'll be fine,i hope you're okay
sincerely missing you
for the last time

chris

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145.] This will be the last letter

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  • Antebellum
    November 12
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    great write. I love how this is worded, i reall
    0y like the second stanza.
    thanks so much for entering.
    good luck.