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Angelic help...

I felt your wings lift me

when I was heavy in woe

you took me to a place

where I could only know.

 

 

It's deep down within me

But it's cluttered and sometimes cold

where I store the good and bad things

only life could know.

 

 

 

You helped disgard the rubish

an acummulation of many years

you told me not to keep this

it would only bring more tears.

 

 

So we cleared, cleaned then polished

and this place is looking smart

And you my loving angels

are the first to have my heart.

 

 

 

 

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  • Poetess12
    August 9
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    Wow! The flow and rhyme of your poem is excellent.
    From beginning to end every stanza is perfect.

    Thank you for your entry.


  • Pure Thought silver member
    August 8

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    I understand this soooo well. My guardian Angels are the best. They have tried to guide me and protected me when I didn't listen. They have kept me safe from my own foolhardy ways.

    Were it not for Angels, I would NOT be here.


  • Cannonsfire
    August 8
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  • Denerica silver member
    August 8

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    Beautiful, that is why we add in prayers may angels encamp around them, their home, their loved ones because it is for moments like this that you describe. Beautiful heart felt write. Well done. Blessings.

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