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The Man Known as Love

Who is love?
Did i know him once?
A traveler of souls.
Where did i meet him again?
In a room surrounded by friends i think
And before i could blink
He consumed me.

Happiness.
A feeling not known before.
Created by the bond of two souls destined to be.

"Love in its raw form."
A love not yet tainted by the uncertainty of the world

Sanity.
Created when everything flows perfectly throughout the mind and soul

Corruption.
The invasion of hate for those that tried to take Love from me.

Loneliness.
Created when Love goes on his way

Failure
Not being able to make him stay.
But instead, pushing him further away

But is Love ever truely gone?
Or does he just need time?
Time to find his mind


Forsaken is not the fate of the man known as Love

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