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One-shots on important dates in the calendar .i.






staunch flow
plug with sequins
holes

in my photograph as

age leaks away
anyway

dripping acid on bloodied inter-face


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wicked, wicked karma




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picture prompt - http://complejo.deviantart.com/art/Happy-birthday-to-you-49211612
20 words
Happy Birthday!

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    August 23
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    Whoa, quite a way to bring my attention to this piece!


  • MichaelBe
    August 10

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    I really like this write
    Not entirely sure what it means, maybe someone trying in vain to fight against age, but i definately do love the abstractness of it, nice work
    Michael