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His Undoing

No one saw is coming.
No one saw his pain.
We passed him everyday,
The pain was etched upon his face.
I watched them giggle behind his back, his so called friends.
And yet, I did nothing to stop it.
Now its too late, hes been pused to far.
He always had the gun, but,
Never the courage to use it.
Where the bullets came from we will never know.

I can still see his eyes.
I never knew eyes could look that blank.
I walked into his bedroom
And all I saw was blood.
The walls, the ceiling, the floor,
Were all covered in clood.

Now I can never sleep a full night,
Knowing I could have saved him if I tried,
If I had done something he would still be here,
But now he, my brother, is gone.

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  • punkbliss
    August 9
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    O.o wow i could just feel the pain that you have felt and the grieving u have done i am so sorry that happened.


  • nasty24
    August 7
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    wow! i am really very sorry if this has happened. Great write.
    my condolences.
    Nightrider24

  • A heartbreaking poem beautifully put. Keep writing