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The Voices In My Head

Voices in my head
that won't stop screaming
telling me to do things
that i can't say no to

Why do i here these voices
telling me to do these things
what are they trying to do
are they trying to kill me

Cut your wrist
the voices say
cut deep
the voices scream

For some reason
I can' say no
these voices
are controlling me

I grabbed the knife
and cut down deep
and immediately
began to scream

I couldn't stop
the pain increased
as the voices
continued to scream

Slash after slash
on my wrist
as the blood
began to drip

Blood on the floor
me on the ground
waiting for death
to come around

Soon I died
a painful death
because of the voices
in my head

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  • Angelshadow
    August 15
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    good poem, don't listen to the voices