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forgottenyourlips

i have forgottenyourlips
(where,
i do not know--
maybe in a taproom somewhere
at the bottom an empty shooter,
or perhaps in a bathroom stall
where the what_______have beens
                      !COULD!
                          &&
                      !SHOULD!
have regularly thrown up)

to relive a kiss,
just a mere kiss,
so grateful a moment
to open a most special
gift one last time(yet,
how sobering a bargain
to savor such an insatiable taste,
knowing it never will grace your pallet again)
but alas,

i have forgottenyourlips
(where,
i think i now know--
the lips that captured my heart
&
strengthened my soul,
now feed on their
captive
like a starved wolf,
ripping&tearing
it apart)

sine te nihil sum

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  • Justmenow
    August 18
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    This is truly amazing and i love this style of poem because it is really quite fantastic to read something as well written and emotional as this because it is so easy to forget a lovers kiss, through choice or not, because you can get so addicted to it, and yet it can fade so quickly, a deep powerful write, well done.


  • EMOverlord
    August 17
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    Beautiful.... that's really all I can say about it, thank you for entering.