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With God This Is.

The warm winds blow around me
as I walk the city streets.
Looking up at the colored sky,
I out stretch my arms
sending thoughts of love.
Wanting you and everyone I meet
To feel all this love I have bottled up inside.
The shinning lines of the sun speak to me.
I'm not lonely
I'm just killing time.

Audrey Evans
8/07/2009

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  • Ashly
    August 7
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    This is really beautiful.
    & I absolutely adore the last 2 lines
    "I'm not lonely
    I'm just killing time."
    that's just amazing.
    Great write.