Once
you where the light that pulled me from the darkness
the enduring words that pushed my soul to seek peace
rays of joy reaching my wounds
salving a broken hearted spirit
sweetest words that painted smiles
across time weather near or far
my memories stir recalling the past
never forgotten and lessons for ever recalled
loves joy and it’s pain
left in this hollow shell of forever emptiness
you where once my healing rain
and then my deepest sorrow
my forever love no matter how deep the pain
you will forever touch my heart
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful
Teresa,this is such a beautiful flowing piece lovely in words and full of emotion. A very enjoyable read

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Beautifully written Teresa, straight from the heart. Thanks for sharing it and keep writing.


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Thank You Charley
Roses to you sweet friend

Teresa
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Wow, this is very deep and the raw feelings you wrote about really come through clear, great work
Thanks for sharing! Have a good day (:
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it comes from my heart
Thank you so much for the lovely comment
Roses to you

Teresa
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wow. amazing poem. im speechless. : )
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Thank you very much
Roses to you

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You're welcome!!!
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