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Once

Once



you where the light that pulled me from the darkness
the enduring words that pushed my soul to seek peace
rays of joy reaching my wounds
salving a broken hearted spirit
sweetest words that painted smiles
across time weather near or far
my memories stir recalling the past
never forgotten and lessons for ever recalled
loves joy and it’s pain
left in this hollow shell of forever emptiness
you where once my healing rain
and then my deepest sorrow
my forever love no matter how deep the pain
you will forever touch my heart

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  • Myrtle Thomas
    September 25

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    Beautiful

    Teresa,this is such a beautiful flowing piece lovely in words and full of emotion. A very enjoyable read


  • ckwriter69
    August 17

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    Beautifully written Teresa, straight from the heart. Thanks for sharing it and keep writing.


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    August 12

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    Wow, this is very deep and the raw feelings you wrote about really come through clear, great work

    Thanks for sharing! Have a good day (:

    x


    • Tears of Roses
      August 20
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      it comes from my heart
      Thank you so much for the lovely comment
      Roses to you

      Teresa


  • iWritePoems
    August 7
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    wow. amazing poem. im speechless. : )

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