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This Funky Mood

Here I am again
depressed. I ask
myself, when will
it get better?
I'm trying to do
the right thing
but I can't get
out of this crappy
mood.

I'm not sure what
it is that I have
to do, but I can't
stay stuck like
this much longer.

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