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When It Rains (Cynket)(My Own Style)

When it rains
I think of you,
the teardrops fall
I feel so blue.

Since you have gone
out of my life,
every day
is filled with strife.

I have missed you
more than you know,
I love you two
now, my tears flow.

Copyright Cynthia Jones
June.12/2009

Author notes

Both of my parents have been on my mind quite a bit, since I lost them.

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  • sweetestsin08
    August 28
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    I love this poem. im sorry for your loss


  • Sarah957
    August 7

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    aww its like the rain is your parents teardrops for the daughter who misses them falling from heaven. Sorry for your loss


  • meliegha
    August 7

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    i think this is a great poem. i honestly know how u feel. Both of my parents have been taken out of my life too.

    ur poem was short but sweet!