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The Wait

Mind humming a glorious battle song
Electrons exploding through a million thoughts
Contemplating all the outcomes
Like an electrical storm output, smoking hot

PUSHING

All existing boundaries aside
Expanding horizons, once thought too impossible to view
Not stopping this time
Until the other side is reached

TUGGING

At the binds
That have been wrapped around my heart too long
tripping me up as an excuse
Making me miss life's sweet kisses and sensual embraces
Never again, is my promise

RISING

To meet the new shining dawn
Breathe in dizzying freedom
I lick my lips in concentration
And apply long stored energy, with clear purpose this time

MOVING

To a new rhythm so warmly welcomed
That rocks my world so wickedly
Knowing that salvation is at hand
Just letting go is the start

The wait is over

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  • Howard Manser gold member
    August 8
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    Great

    This has a wonderful rhythm. A fun quick-paste read with a nice message snuck in at the end. Howard


  • Swangrnv gold member
    August 7

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    outstanding!!

    this piece feels so very refreshing and hopeful!! full of an energy that is very contagious..give me what you been sipping on! l.o.l. j.k. i loved this write my friend..


  • DaWildChild
    August 7

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    This a marvellous piece of write, the wait is over indeed, welcome back and thank you very much for sharing this piece, its beautiful.

  • mcfreeman
    August 7
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    This is...GREAT!

    and tasty....

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