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She Dreamed

She dreamed she was a child
with pretty dresses and angelic wings.
Somehow she was part angel and part child
able to touch people's hearts with meaning.
Or perhaps it was love she awoken
and wished she could go back and be her.
She begin to think she was some freak
or then perhaps maybe still that girl.
Being told her voice sounded like one
sometimes she goes into that young heart.
She learned to be through the years
she wondered who she was inside.
Perhaps she is both woman and child
only scars bleed when its confronted.
That somehow your perhaps two but
still aware only perhaps embarassed.

She wishes she could go back to

her dreams and be that beautiful child.

One who touches hearts with love

and meaning perhaps that is really why.

She never wanted to be old growing up

she was afraid of not being loved.

She wishes she could be that angelic child

with pretty dresses and colors of worth.
Flying around touching hearts

with some sort of touch deep within her soul.

 Different dresses she ware with

angelic wings that in a dream made her happy.

If only wings was real and she could

fly into the arms of what is meaning and love.


(Going back to bed) had to wake up and
type this......

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  • prairiegal gold member
    August 23

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    Sherry- See you are still nightowl? Awesome you are still writing!Wonderful possiblities

    I've written very little in last couple years so don't think I can critque your work. Just popped in quick


    • Sherry gold member
      August 23
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      Miss you

      Yes I am gosh what a surprise. I am on face book are u? If so let me know ill add u im not here a lot. But I recently started again this yr writing again some. Thank you.

  • It's lovely.

    Just because we grow 'up' doesn't mean we should abandon the innocense of youth. That is what has degraded every world power since time began- collapse of the system starting with corruption. Your inner child is simply closer to your surface...because this world of man has not clawed you with toxic poison as normally you might have been.

    You are blessed.

    -James-


  • Frogzter gold member
    August 7

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    She is loved more than she knows and should change for no-one but embrace the beauty that she really is inside and out. Glad to see ya penning sissy! Love ya, mean it! Don't forget it!

    Love and light,

    Always, sissy


    • Sherry gold member
      August 7
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      Hi Sissy Frog thank u for reading my poem that means a lot to me you take the time to read it. Glad you still love me I have missed our talks on the phone. Felt a little distant lately not getting to talk with you as we did. Your comment touched my heart means a lot coming from you. Thanks hugs to you today with love always too, Sis ♥

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