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July Haiku

-1-
wrapping paper scraps
in the wind
the smell of smoke
---
you come clean
the dusk
grows dirtier
---
secrets
I don’t feel like keeping
the wildflower you gave me

-2-
dog wading through corn
with no lead
a man shouts and wanders
---
the pluck
of cherry pickers
under someone else’s trees

-3-
rain
a sudden rush
I close the windows
---
I forget to feed the fish
the tench and the koi
carp

-4-
thunderflies
dwell on newsprint
we’re in for a storm

-5-
unlucky
black cat
crosses the car’s path
---
challenging the ace
all eyes on one white line
deuce      advantage          deuce

-6-
strolling
ominous clouds
reflecting in puddles
---
hand-me-down raincoat
she drains
the pockets

-7-
heavy rain
still driving down
familiar streets
---
computers give us such freedom
restart now
restart later

-8-
at the fallow field’s edge
bleached wheat stalks
rabbit bones
---
sussurating barley
still green
the rabbit doesn’t run

-9-
her wardrobe is inadequate
another shirt
tossed to the floor

-10-
hanging washing
still giddy
the line bobs

-11-
lunch out
redistributing
olives
---
horsefly orbiting
the boy orbiting
the pond

-12-
last light
glancing moths
rising from long grass
---
a passing car
hushes
the owl

-13-
hooked stems
of ripe barley
catching the sun

-14-
rain
tap dancing
on the neighbours’ patio

-15-
my shadow
skimming over fields
swallows
---
washing the car
three children dunk their rags
in hot water

-16-
inside
and outside
thunder

-17-
head held high
a rabbit
in the mouth of a fox
---
waiting for calm
seagulls plunging
between waves
---
beached
seaweed strands
scallops and crabs
---
sea salt
tints glasses
a distant mist

-18-
the colours of dawn
heather and gorse
on the hills
---
the screech of a buzzard
lingering
a sheep’s jawbone

-19-
under siege
defending the sandcastle
underwater
---
breakers
lap around
the ruins of a moat

-20-
tides turn
the mouth of the river
swallows
---
uniformed oystercatchers
guarding
the sandbank
---
bluer than sky
or sea
hydrangeas

-21-
speechless
he watches
the sleeping fox
---
hiding
in the bracken
the prickle of a thistle

-22-
exposed by a splash
the gannet
streaks across the sky
---
low tide
reveals
the noses of seals

-23-
cows
look out to sea
white horses

-24-
on the verge
rooks litter
telephone wires

-25-
startled by whirring
at my computer
a trapped butterfly

-26-
picking apples
from a branch
of Tesco

-27-
in the breeze
a cropped field
bristles

-28-
shaking from head to toe
the dog escapes
the bath

-29-
looking up
storm clouds coming
uncomfortably close

-30-
juicy
beneath the tree
fallen plums and gossip

-31-
caught in a trap
my foot
in my mouth
---
beneath
the dead tree
saplings 

Author notes

Haikutastic! I was focusing on pivot words/lines with these - words or lines that mean the haiku can be read in more than one way, to give extra images and a sort of layered effect. Which basically resulted in an army of bad puns charging about the place. Good times.

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  • Ryno
    November 14

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    This truly WAS Haikutastic! This made me super nostalgic for summer, and everything about it. Fantastic imagery. You captured so many images and visuals about summer, and through all these wonderfully written tidbits, you captured the essence of summer...

    I also commend your motivation and dedication! What a good exercise to keep you on your feet! Excellently done!