crayon dust and
daybreak
bend
between fleshy
buildings
covering grey
in florid tulip buds
seconds scatter
over crashing waves
leaving milky sketches
touching the edges
of sky
and drowsy lines
sail into pinholes
behind rose
satin drapes
Author notes
67. crayon dust and
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A contest entry
- 1000 Titles. by Antebellum.
550 points, ended August 13, 90 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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excellent
Yet another beautiful poem that you have penned
Love the as Judith Chandler says the dusky imagery.......
Best of luck in the contest
Hugs
Susan~~~
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I like this a lot, always enjoy reading a piece related to visual art. There was a sort of dusky impression to this piece, I felt.
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I did this title too (:
It's funny seeing how different the take is on it!
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amazing take on this.
I left it hanging with 'and' in the title to see where it would go.beautifully written,
thanks for entering
good luck -
Very nicely done! I love the images you have created.
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i like the color you add in this... bits and pieces like it is through that pinhole. just enough that it makes me want to see that view, and oh, what a beautiful landscape it is.
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"seconds scatter
over crashing waves"
I love those lines, and all the beautiful imagery in this write. -
so pretyyy!!
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crayon dust and ... masterpiece!!
This was deeply stunning. Metaphor
just dribbles from the page and
this is poetry my mind just pines for.
Love it hun, keep up the great work!
& best wishes in the contest
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Your first stanza was great. i love the fleshy buildings...gives me an idea for my own work hehehe. You, again, emerge with another original work.
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