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Hope Is Lost

Silently, the child weeps
Cries echo out to those who see
Loud bangs of thunder cascade
To those who are dead
And all the angels cry out to heaven
That the world is dying
Earth is dying
We need no prayers
We have no fears
No rosary can save us
We are at the mercy of our own

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Written March 29th, 2004

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  • March 29, 2004
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    nice nic job
    the imagery is outstanding
    i really love it
    the flow is uninterputed and execlent(sp)
    great job again
    Goddess Bless
    Megan