There ain’t nothing to spit at all
But to give my all
To the One the one who is worthy
Who saved a wretched fool that was filthy
God, I just get high off of you
Like a stoner suckin on weed
I prepare myself to run to you
Just like a warrior getting his steed
You breathed into my soul
Like if you were giving CPR
Thank you Lord, You are Omnipresent
Where ever I go, there you are
You are Omniscient
You know my deepest secrets
You are Omnipotent
You spoke, there was light
Your dope might is the sickest
Jesus, you are God’s only accurate visual
You conquered hell, you’re so incredible
You fill my heart until it is full
Your power is vicious like that of an angry bull
You deserve my worship
That’s the way is ought to be
Humanity knows how to praise
Look at how we worship property
God you’re so holy
Just the sight of you, demons have to flee
I humble myself
So I worship you on bended knees
I long to be in your presence
It is like sweet incense
My body to you
Is a broken present
So mold me Creator
I am your clay
Even with my many chips and cracks
You say “I am here to stay”
You are so merciful
You allowed me to live this long
Even to write this love song
You take me back
Even when I am wrong
Some call you the man upstairs
A lot don’t even honor thee
You are my friend
So I call you G-O-D
He is just so awesome
The planets and stars are His wallpap-a
My daddy is an open book
NO FALSE DATA
So Read!!!!
Author notes
I just want to praise God before I go to bed. The songs that inspired me to write this are Star Struck by Da Truth, We Worship You by Da Ammbassador, So Worthy by Dj Morph, Holy God by Syd, and Marvelous Light by Ced Enough
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6WXn9dJ8_RQ Star Struck
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_W-NUE0iBgU We Worship You
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vkhasPM0Yw8 So Worthy
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NU90eyVDgWs Holy God
http://www.myspace.com/cedenough Marvelous Light
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You spiritual poems are always very intoresting. There not all "If you do not believe in the lord, thow shall DIE if fiery hell!" which if that was the case, I would NEVER read your work.
Good job, keep it up
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Why thank you Mini Me!!!
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I love this soooo so so much! i just dont know what to say! it is amazing in every single bit and i love your note "I just want to praise God before I go to bed." its like this just came out and you didn't have to think(which you probably did) But truely amazing!!!
THe last stanza is deffinately my fave!!
This part soundds a little wierd "Your power is vicious like that of an angry bull"
maybe this would sound better "your power is more vicious than an angry bull" idk your choice but yeah!
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Thanks a lot for the reply!!!! The last stanza is my favorite too. Part of the last stanza is from the song Star Struck by Da Truth
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i kinda like it, but i think idont like it because i dont belive in god, but besides that it is an all around good poem. Good job! =D
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Thanks for the reply. You should give God a chance. He is a good listener.
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Rise up and Praise Him...yes yes yes, you could have gone on and on, you were on a roll, and for any reader I hope it would get them to Praise even if they never knew how before because you feel annointed as you wrote this, awesome, good for any youth group too. Well done. Blessings.
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Why thank you!!! Your reply is greatly appreciated and I am happy that it touched yours and a couple of other hearts as well.
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