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I Am

You say I'm a loser
She says I'm a freak
He says I'm stupid
They say I'm an idiot

But I say something else
I am power
I am heaven
And I am hell

I am salvation
I am evil
But I'm really a fucking work of ART

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just something random I came up with

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  • GraveyardGoddess
    August 13

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    Haha.

    I liked the FUCK word. Do you know what I say?

    I say this is an amazing poem, and i adore you. You're a wonderful girl and I miss talking to you. I hope I can talk to you soon <3 Iloveyou. Kepp your head up and keep smiling. When things die down I'll message you. If anything comes up. Message me; and I'll get back to you. You're fanFUCKINGtastic <3

    KerinaSkyee
    ♥

  • poets whisper
    August 7

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    I liked all of it except the last line and that's because I don't like the "f" word. I think if we have a decent vocabulary, we needn't resort to that ... perhaps you want to stun the readers. A word like amazing wouldn't shock I suppose. The word is over used today and I don't think it sounds professional really, but that is just me.