Completely enraged,
power to his head.
Completely deranged.
so many Jews dead.
Bloody screams,
wails of pain,
home-sick souls.
cries for life.
Hope is gone,
the invasion must prevail!
I won’t make it ‘til dawn,
my life will fail.
Evil is taken,
it is too late now.
Good took them away,
but my body lies on the ground.
Author notes
This may not be very good. I couldn't put my best effort into because it was for a class assignment so I had to be careful about what I wrote.
What did you think
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So true
It is sad how people often believes what a mad man says for a mad man is full of trickery they are usually very smart and cunning to find ways to make others believe what he says is the only way . Like sheep they follow into hell listening not to the meanings of the words as the bodies swell .Hear not the screams of humanity the chosen ones this day .Never thinking when will our turn come along the way . To read about the hews and how this mad man and all who followed him so sick of mind that they would think any man is any better than any other for we are all made from the same cloth only those who are mad entertwines themselves within the minds of others to make their hate ring true
Bravo on this and yes I understand in school thewy would take it thewrongway today you have to be most careful at what you write and say
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It's still a good poem you didn't have to put alot into it that was just enought to be said and straight to the point it was good because it came from inside of you it was what you felt that brought this poem out of you for usall to read.
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Well shown point.
Peace and love- Mitchell
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this is awesome darlinform begining to end this was great,it was emotional,awesome write darlin
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