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Invisible

Would you believe me if I told you that I'm really here?
Please,                             
look at me.               
Before I     
  dis
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  • TheGlassHathCometh
    August 8
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    Nice!

    I like it! It makes me feel lonely though. Which...is probably why I think it's nice. Lol.


  • Sergeant Awesome
    August 7
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    short, sweet, to the point. I like it

  • novak8
    August 6

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    Reminds me a lot like ee cummings. You make your words dance upon the page (webpage that is), adding an extra sense of life to them.